this i a very good piece, i would like it even more if there were some more defined edges some places, so make it NOT so soft looking as it is, some stronger shaddows to defind the hands for eks, not a lot darker but some edges should be sharper
no english sorry. Men på dansk, så er hun flot. Der er flere fejl, som at ringen ikke går rundt om fingeren. Meget sort ved øjenpuderne, den er blevet for dominerende og så er der noget ved hendes pegefinger, tror det er afdækning som ikke er kommet af. Men ser man bort fra det, så er det rigtig godt lavet. Håret er rigtig godt lavet og læberne/tænderne. Du bliver helt sikkert god til det hen ad vejen.
Thanks for your reply's and comments. Ch-art; There are some shadows that could be a little darker indeed, try to do them with a little bit of dilluted burnt umber. Bjorn; translated your comment with Google Translate (unfortunately I don't know any Danish :) ). The ring seems to be loose on her finger indeed. Will put some shade on the bottom and the side of it.
Nice piece. you did a great job on the hair. But i have to agree with ch-art. You need a bit sharper shadows, so it doesn't look so soft. But other than that, very nice job.